Critic This! (Beneath The Wind)
I've realized in my days spent songwriting, that I gain more by having people critic my music, than to get praises about it.
So now I invite every reader to give this song a listen and tell me your honest thoughts. It won't take long. (Or if you prefer, rate it out of 5.)
You don't have to be a music expert. Just be honest. Please don't praise it out of kindness. I'd rather you slam it and I'll thank you for it. Whatever you say will help me write better songs in future. Here goes!
This song is called Beneath The Wind (with lyrics).
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5 comments:
OK, maybe asking for criticism was a bad idea. 'Coz there's only two things to do when listening to music:
Either you turn it on, or turn it off! xD
For those of you who've checked it out (I can't track whom), thanks for your support.
I'm doing my best to be proactive about my music passion, but it seems opportunities to be heard are quite rare. Penang is not exactly a happening place for these kinda things.
Improving myself each day and with each song I write. Never giving up! :)
hahaha..hey I did listen to ur song.Honestly,I think the lyrics are quite nice but I don't really think that the parts where hit high notes are accurate enough.What I mean is sometimes your voice go out of pitch?That's my opinion anyway since you ask for criticism..no hard feelings k =) anyway there's always room for improvement and when you are passionate about something,I think you should go for it.However,I do agree Penang is not the best place for this.hee.
Aww... I thought the out-of-keyness added character ;)
"A true friend criticizes you so you know your weaknesses. False ones keep praising you, so you never improve."
Can't remember where I read that from. Thanks, Huey Wen!
honestly tis da 1st time i listen to the song tat u haf writen urself..i'm impressed that u're able to write songs(not many are able to do tat)..it's nice though..juz think der's lots to improve..wid some adjustment da songs(on the music and da singing)would be better..all da best ya
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Thank you, Anonymous! :)
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